Rough Cut Feedback

• Music- we need to make sure that it doesn't drown out our dialogue when we come to editing our final cut.
• Lighting- some of our dark shots are too grainy. We need to light our set better for our actual shoot. This is why we are using a larger number of lights.
• We are going to switch the lava lamp shot and the keyboard shot at the very beginning of the sequence, as before we brought the audience into the action only to pull them back out again. The new order of shots sorts this problem out.
• The main hacker attack shot needs tighter framing, and we need to make sure not to reveal the attacker's face.
• The end of the sequence needs to be more scary- for example, we need our rookie hacker to jump when the door knocks.
• We need to rescript for 5 characters.
• Add some more shots of the rookie hacker moving (throwing rubbish in bin, getting CD from across room)