Pitch: Treatment and Feedback

Once we had our film idea, it was required that we provide a treatment (see below) to present our idea, in the hopes that we would get a green light and could go ahead on planning our sequence.

Sadly, we left with an amber light, meaning there were quite a few adjustments to be made. Here's the feedback we were given:

Year 12 film pitch feedback group 1

This feedback proved itself to be very useful and we feel that our sequence is much better now that these changes have been made.